i hear you call for me,
quietly and subtly
in a metallic mask
of morbid tones.
you manipulate the relics
of my fragmented mind
in diminished broken chords.
as i become overcome
with emotion in
content calamities,
i seek defiance from
the truth in your eyes.
i hear sadness
seeping through your soul
channelling in love or rejection
in harmonic keys of flats and sharps.
your frequent dissonance demands
innocence as fingers hit the
white and black, and hammers
bang the strings pulled taut.
i step to sustain whilst i
play my mind in transposition.
imperfect in form and tradition
perfect cadence, surrealism.
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i am bored, and i cant be bothered doing my homework, so here comes a poem 
recently finishing the final grade of piano, i shant continue into amus and lmus, since i have my hsc to complete.
this poem, is a random addition to my works, inspired by ts eliots poems that seek the meaning behind modern existence. i agree with much of his poetry. what is the point of living and then, to face the inevitibility of death? were all at our downfall anyway~
so my poem, doesnt really express that idea, but rather conveys my emotion in my pieces. my grade 8 piano examiner said i didnt show my personality in the piece..which i strongly did. hence, i can conclude that she dislikes me on a whole..
by the way, this poem is opened for interpretation
so feel free to analyse it however you want haha XD
recently finishing the final grade of piano, i shant continue into amus and lmus, since i have my hsc to complete.
this poem, is a random addition to my works, inspired by ts eliots poems that seek the meaning behind modern existence. i agree with much of his poetry. what is the point of living and then, to face the inevitibility of death? were all at our downfall anyway~
so my poem, doesnt really express that idea, but rather conveys my emotion in my pieces. my grade 8 piano examiner said i didnt show my personality in the piece..which i strongly did. hence, i can conclude that she dislikes me on a whole..
by the way, this poem is opened for interpretation
so feel free to analyse it however you want haha XD 
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I didnt get anything, haha too complicated and non-esl language so yeah
bwahah
but i can tell its kinda depressing *somehow, though u told me first lol
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